The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph presents the
number
of international tourists visiting three
various areas in European nations. This
includes data from 1987 to 2007.
Overall
, in 1987, there was a high number
of visitors going to the coast of three
countries in Europe and the least of them went to lakes. After 20 years, the highest figure
still visits the coast, however
, the lowest number
was overseas tourists going
to the mountains.
In detail, in 1987, there were 40 Wrong verb form
go
thousand
travellers in three
different areas in European countries who went to coastal areas. After 5 years, it gradually went down to half, however
, the figure
suddenly jumped to around 60 thousand
in 2007. In comparison, there were 20 thousand
overseas mountain visitors in 1987. Moreover
, it slowly increased by 10 and remained its figure
from 1997 to 2002. After that year, it slightly rose and reached approximately 20 thousand
which was almost similar to the lowest point of visitors on the coast in 1992.
Furthermore
, 10 thousand
international travellers visited lakes in three
European destinations in 1987. After a decade, the figure
significantly inclined, quadrupling its number
in 1987. From 1997, it substantially reached its highest point of roughly 80 thousand
overseas explorers, conversely
, it suddenly dropped to exactly 50 thousand
in 2007Submitted by cng123 on
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