The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph presents the
number
of international tourists visiting Use synonyms
three
various areas in European nations. Use synonyms
This
includes data from 1987 to 2007.
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Overall
, in 1987, there was a high Linking Words
number
of visitors going to the coast of Use synonyms
three
countries in Europe and the least of them went to lakes. After 20 years, the highest Use synonyms
figure
still visits the coast, Use synonyms
however
, the lowest Linking Words
number
was overseas tourists Use synonyms
going
to the mountains.
In detail, in 1987, there were 40 Wrong verb form
go
thousand
travellers in Use synonyms
three
different areas in European countries who went to coastal areas. After 5 years, it gradually went down to half, Use synonyms
however
, the Linking Words
figure
suddenly jumped to around 60 Use synonyms
thousand
in 2007. In comparison, there were 20 Use synonyms
thousand
overseas mountain visitors in 1987. Use synonyms
Moreover
, it slowly increased by 10 and remained its Linking Words
figure
from 1997 to 2002. After that year, it slightly rose and reached approximately 20 Use synonyms
thousand
which was almost similar to the lowest point of visitors on the coast in 1992.
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Furthermore
, 10 Linking Words
thousand
international travellers visited lakes in Use synonyms
three
European destinations in 1987. After a decade, the Use synonyms
figure
significantly inclined, quadrupling its Use synonyms
number
in 1987. From 1997, it substantially reached its highest point of roughly 80 Use synonyms
thousand
overseas explorers, Use synonyms
conversely
, it suddenly dropped to exactly 50 Linking Words
thousand
in 2007Use synonyms
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