The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summrarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
diagram shows how plastic
bottles
are recycled in various and specific steps. First of all, people have to throw plastic
bottles
on
recycled waste bins. Change preposition
in
This
is necessary to make possible the start of the cycle for using again that material. After that, garbage men take that material and bring to
industries which are allowed to recycle. Later, the people who work in the recycling centre sort the Correct pronoun usage
it to
bottles
and compress them into blocks, using a specific machine. The next step consists in
crashing these blocks and washing the result. Only after that, it is possible to produce Change preposition
of
plastic
pellets which have a fundamental role. They have to be heated to form raw material. This
new material has to be organized in consistent blocks ready to be used for producing another things
in Replace the adjective
another thing
other things
plastic
. The last
step consists in
using Change preposition
of
this
raw material for realizing end products, like t-shirts, pens, bags or another
Correct quantifier usage
other
plastic
bottles
for example
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