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The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summrarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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This
 diagram shows how
plastic
bottles
 are recycled in various and specific steps. First of all, people have to throw
plastic
bottles
on
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in
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 recycled waste bins.
This
 is necessary to make possible the start of the cycle for using again that material. After that, garbage men take that material and bring
to
Correct pronoun usage
it to
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 industries which are allowed to recycle. Later, the people who work in the recycling centre sort the
bottles
 and compress them into blocks, using a specific machine. The next step consists
in
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of
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 crashing these blocks and washing the result. Only after that, it is possible to produce
plastic
 pellets which have a fundamental role. They have to be heated to form raw material.
This
 new material has to be organized in consistent blocks ready to be used for producing
another things
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another thing
other things
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 in
plastic
. The
last
 step consists
in
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of
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 using
this
 raw material for realizing end products, like t-shirts, pens, bags or
another
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other
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plastic
bottles
for example
.
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