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Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter: introduce yourself explain what the problem is suggest solutions to the problem

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
 letter to complain about the noise of the construction
work
 which is being done on my street. I am Theo Akl. I am living in a house on 276 Wilson Street. There has been construction going on the street since
last
 week. The area is covered with dust and noise. I spend my whole day at home as I
work
 remotely, It is frustrating for me to
work
 in a noisy environment. The construction starts from 7 a.m until 10 p.m. Sometimes during my meetings my clients can not even hear me. I
also
 have two children, an infant and a toddler. It is hard to get enough sleep for us in
this
 environment, which causes a lack of concentration during our
work
. My family and I face many issues from the noise. I request you to take some steps to tackle
this
 problem. Installing some sound insulations and making a
work
-hours schedule could be helpful. I trust that you will handle
this
 complaint seriously and respond at your earliest convenience. You may contact me at [email protected] for any clarifications. Yours sincerely, Theo Akl
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task achievement
Consider adding more details about how the noise specifically affects your work productivity and family life to further strengthen your complaint.
coherence cohesion
Review sentence structures to ensure variation and avoid any repetitiveness.
task achievement
Clear and polite introduction with a concise explanation of the issue.
coherence cohesion
Logical organization and clear paragraphing, maintaining one idea per paragraph.
task achievement
The letter uses an appropriate tone for a formal complaint, maintaining politeness throughout.
coherence cohesion
Effective use of greeting and closing that are suitable for a formal letter.
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