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The graph below shows the total amount of waste produced by cities and towns of six countries in 1980, 1990 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table graph illustrates the total amount of
waste
 produced by cities and towns of six countries in 1980,1990 and 2000.
Overall
, it can be noticed that the number of
prouced
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produced
waste
 respectively higher in
USA
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the USA
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 and has been increased every
decades
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decade
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. For more detailed information, Ireland the
secound
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second
 highest
was
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prouduced
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produced
20
millions
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million
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of
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tonnes
then
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than
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 in 1990 increased
41
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millions
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million
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of
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tonnes after 10 decades in 2000, sharply downward 19
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million
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millions
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millions of
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 tonnes of
waste
.
However
, Portugal was slightly upward
in
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each year. In 2000
was
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there was
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 5
millions
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million
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 of
waste
.
Moreover
, Korea
decreas
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decrease
decreased
 sharply
about
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by about
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 12
millions
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million
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 in 2000. 
In contrast
, Japan
was
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had
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 the lowest decline produced, in the opposite way
USA
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the USA
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the
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had the
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 highest
increased
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increase
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.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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