The diagram below shows how instant noodies are manufactured.

The diagram below shows how instant noodies are manufactured.
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THE FLOWCHART SHOWS THE PROCESS OF MAKING INSTANT
NOODLES
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OVERALL
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IT IS CLEAR THAT
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MANUFACTURING INSTANT
NOODLES
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CONSIST OF 8 VARIOUS STAGES, STARTING FROM STORAGE SILOS AND ENDING WITH LABELLING OF PRODUCTS.
FIRSTLY
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, SILOS FILLED WITH FLOUR AND KEPT
IT
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IN THE POCKETS TRANSFER BY TRUCKS INTO MIXERS. WATER AND OIL
ADDED
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WERE ADDED
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TO IT, SO
MIXTURE
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THE MIXTURE
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TURNED INTO DOUGH SHEETS. THROUGH ROLLERS IT TURNED INTO DOUGH STRIPS. THE NEXT STEP
INVOLVING
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INVOLVED
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NOODLE DISCS,
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THEN
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THE
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NOODLES
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WERE COOKED IN OIL,
AS WELL AS
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DRYING
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DRIED
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. ALL DRYING
NOODLES
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WERE PUT INTO THE CUPS BY ADDING VEGETABLES AND SPICES,
THEN
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ALL
NOODLES
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WERE LABELLED AND PUT LOGOS.
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