You would like to reduce your working hours in order to study part time. write a letter to your boss. explain why you want to reduce your working hours. say which hours you would like to work, describe how your part-time studies world kenefit your employer.

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Dear Mr. White, I am writing to regard to my working change part-time from full- time. My name is
Amonda
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Amanda
Zhou, I have been working as a teacher for 5 years. As a matter of fact, I have been an
outstarding
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outstanding
English teacher
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your school for 3 years. I want to reduce my job time to 25 hours from 35 hours a week
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because I will study French. I
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that the French will
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a highlight as an international school.
In addition
, most parents hope their
childrens
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children
children's
study the
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language from their feedback.
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, I argue that the French
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, more students the opportunity to increase
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name.
As a result
, I need your support, because it is
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significant
for me. I know my
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is
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busy every day. I will greatly appreciate
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you can agree to work 4 hours from Monday to Friday
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8:00am-1:00 pm. I will study every afternoon. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours
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Sincerely
, Amand Zhou
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coherence cohesion
Focus on ensuring that each paragraph presents and develops a clear, single idea. This will enhance the coherence of your letter.
task achievement
Make sure to proofread your letter for small errors or typos, as these can impact clarity, even if they don't severely lower your score.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a clear opening and closing, which frames your request nicely.
task achievement
You provided specific reasons and a clear schedule, showing consideration for your employer's planning.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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