The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.
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The diagram describes where Anthropology graduates from one educational institution found
job
after their undergraduate degree course. Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
In addition
, the table indicates the earnings of the anthropologists in work
after five years.
Studying the chart in more detail it can be clearly seen that the majority of graduates (52 per cent
) were employed to
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in
full time
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full-time
job
. The Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
least
proportion combined partial Correct word choice
lowest
work
and postgraduate studies or postgraduate studies only (with 5 per cent
and 8 per cent
respectively). Others had part-time work
(15 per cent
) or did not find the
job (12 per Correct article usage
a
cent
). Looking at the table with indicated salaries
after 5 years' work
we can see that that
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the
salaries
for half of persons
(50 per Add an article
the persons
cent
) were earned in governmental
sector (more than 100,000 USD). The same earnings were observed in freelance consultants (40 per Add an article
the governmental
cent
). 5 per cent
of employees, working in governmental
field and as freelancers and 10 per Add an article
the governmental
cent
of workers of
private companies had Change preposition
in
salaries
between 25,000 and 49,999 USD.
In summary, the largest part of Antropology
graduates were able to find Correct your spelling
Anthropology
a full-time
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full-time work
a full-time job
work
after finishing their studies and the highest salaries
after 5 years of work
had workforce from the governmental sector.Submitted by rasav on
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