The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map provides information about the current state of the Industrial area in Norbiton town and its proposed construction.
Overall
, new housing complexes and community places are to be built after all factories were
demolished.
Looking at the planned infrastructure, there are a lot of expansions of the current roads. Wrong verb form
are
Firstly
, a smaller circle of traffic will be built in the south area, which connects the south and centre roads. Furthermore
, the bigger traffic circle is going to be extended to the northwest area to facilitate the housing complex and new shops. In addition
to this
, there will be a new road that goes up north, which overpasses the river. A new roadway will also
go along the river and the new housing buildings on the north side. To accommodate this
new development, farmland will be reduced in size.
On the other hand
, in the east, there will be a lot of new buildings to be constructed. There will be lots of houses and a new school at the end
of the east road. A little roadway to the north will also
be paved away to reach the playground. Lastly
, there will be a medical centre as well, which will be between the roundabouts.Submitted by farr.shad.k on
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