TASK 1: The table below shows the percentage of men and women employed in four different types of industries in one twon in 1990, 2000, and 2010.
The table provides data about women and men who worked in 4 different types of
industries
in 1990, 2000, and 2010.
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Overall
, it can be seen that in 1990 the number of male employees in the manufacturing industry had the highest Linking Words
percentage
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while
women employees in the same industry showed the lowest Linking Words
percentage
in 2010
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To begin
with male workers in 1990 and 2000 had the same Linking Words
percentage
in the retail and health Use synonyms
industries
. Since the manufacturing process, the number of employees decreased by 20% between 1990 and 2010 Use synonyms
while
tourism declined steadily by around 10%
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to
female workers in 4 different Remove the preposition
apply
industries
had no big changes over the period of time. Use synonyms
For example
, the Linking Words
percentage
of health and shop Use synonyms
industries
increased only by 2% between 1990 and 2010. Since the manufacturing industry dropped about 3%Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words industries, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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