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The charts below show how global water resources are distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The charts below show how global water resources are distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The charts provide information about the distribution of global
water
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 resources.
Overall
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, it is evident that the biggest proportion of total world
water
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 is saline
water
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,
whereas
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 frozen
water
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 accounts for the highest total fresh
water
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.
Furthermore
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, except for
Canada
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, agricultural
water
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use
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 is the dominant category in most regions,
while
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 domestic
use
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 remains relatively low. Looking in more detail, the proportion of saline
water
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 comprises 97,50% of the total world
water
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,
while
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this
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 figure for fresh
water
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 is a tiny percentage. In terms of the division of the total
fresh
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freshwater
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water
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, the highest value is observed in frozen
water
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 at 69.80%, the lowest one is the fresh renewable
water
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.
Additionally
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, the ratios of the fresh underground
water
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 and underground ice make up 29.90%, and 0.90%, respectively. Regarding
water
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 usage, the highest proportion is observed in irrigation at approximately 50% in Saudi Arabia.
Moreover
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, the agricultural usage rate in
Canada
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 is lower than in Egypt at 30% compared to 40%. In Saudi Arabia, the industrial
water
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use
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 rate is around 18%,
whereas
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 in
Canada
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, it is roughly 44%.
In addition
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, the stats for domestic
use
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 are nearly the same in Egypt, and Saudi Arabia at around 10%, even though
this
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 pattern in
Canada
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 is just under 20%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, canada, use with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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