Some people believe that lessons on becoming a good parent should be included in school curriculum. Others think that it is not essential for students. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.
Some individuals are of the view that educating
people
on being a good mother or father should be part of the learning curriculum while
others believe that this
is not vital. This
essay will discuss both views. My opinion seconds this
statement.
On the one hand, children must be taught on
all things in life including educating them on motherhood and Change preposition
apply
fatherhoood
in schools. Correct your spelling
fatherhood
Further
, this
is a necessity in life. Furthermore
, we have many children who are orphans and have no one to tell them about parenthood. The statistics of orphans from The New Times Newspaper in America states
that Correct subject-verb agreement
state
are
3 out of 5 know nothing about parenthood. The only best place where they can get Unnecessary verb
apply
such
teachings are schools, hence
it is necessary for their education to have a curriculum that will give them such
a teaching.
On the other hand
, some people
think that it is unnecessary to educate scholars on being a mother or a father. Asdditionally
, they Correct your spelling
Additionally
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believe
people
can be taught all these things in their homes, churches, communities and different clubs. In addition
, some say Mr. Google will educate them as well and they can also
read different books with such
information. For example
, cultural people
or the elderly can teach about parenthool
. Students should Correct your spelling
parenthood
also
observe how the elderly people
behave and live and then
they can immitate
them.
In conclusion, being a mother or father, is a belief that others say, should be added Correct your spelling
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while
other
are in disagreement with Fix the agreement mistake
others
this
point because they say, it is unnecessary as people
can google any and
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apply
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from them is one the
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of the
people
shoud
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