The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts demonstrate the various methods used by three different countries
such
as the Republic of Korea, Sweden and the United Kingdom in waste
management especially
harmful products.
Add the comma(s)
, especially
Overall
, the majority of the British people and Scandinavians dump their waste
underground, whereas
the Republic of Korea recycles most of their trash. Both Swedish and Korean citizens do waste
management by recycling, underground burial and incineration.
According to
the Korean pie chart, around two-thirds (69%) of harmful waste
is recycled followed by burying under the soil(22%) and destruction by fire(9%). Whereas
, in the Northern group, underground disposal(55%) surpassed recycling by a quarter and incernation by a fifth.
In contrast
, 82% of the total waste
of the Britishers was dumped underground, and the remaining 8% by chemical treatment and another 8% by dumping at sea. Additionally
, 2% of wastes are destroyed by fire. The UK used five ways for waste
management while
both Sweden and Korea used only three methodSubmitted by drnivyamohan1992 on
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