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The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts demonstrate the various methods used by three different countries
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 as the Republic of Korea, Sweden and the United Kingdom in
waste
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 management
especially
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, especially
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 harmful products.
Overall
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, the majority of the British people and Scandinavians dump their
waste
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 underground,
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 the Republic of Korea recycles most of their trash. Both Swedish and Korean citizens do
waste
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 management by recycling, underground burial and incineration.
According to
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 the Korean pie chart, around two-thirds (69%) of harmful
waste
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 is recycled followed by burying under the soil(22%) and destruction by fire(9%).
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, in the Northern group, underground disposal(55%) surpassed recycling by a quarter and incernation by a fifth.
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, 82% of the total
waste
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 of the Britishers was dumped underground, and the remaining 8% by chemical treatment and another 8% by dumping at sea.
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, 2% of wastes are destroyed by fire. The UK used five ways for
waste
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 management
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 both Sweden and Korea used only three method

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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