The table below show daily oil production in four countries from 2000 to 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table above depicts
oil
production per day in four different African countries between the years 2000 and 2004. Overall
, it can be seen that Nigeria had a fluctuation
trend Replace the word
fluctuating
while
Chad from the years 2000 until 2002 did not produce oil
at all and then
started produce
in 2003. Change the form of the verb
producing
Besides
that, Congo have been
experienced a Wrong verb form
has
continuously increased
and Somalia Replace the word
continuous increase
was
gradually decreased.
First of all, Nigeria produces as many as 205.000 Verb problem
has
litres
of oil
, but then
the number
constantly sunk to 190.000 in 2000. However
, the number
was
surprisingly rose again in 2003 with Unnecessary verb
apply
the
total Correct article usage
a
number
210.000
. On the other side, Chad did not Change preposition
of 210.000
manufacturing
Change the verb form
manufacture
oil
in years
2000, 2001, and 2002. Suddenly, the country Correct article usage
the years
produces
about 8000 Wrong verb form
produced
litres
of oil
and sharply climbed to 50000 litres
, which was a really huge number
.
Initially
, Congo started with a great number
between
other countries, which was 275.000. Change preposition
of
Nonetheless
, the oil
production became smaller, respectively 234.000, 222.000, 215.000, and 203.000. Besides
, there is Somalia that
started with just around 5000 Correct pronoun usage
which
oil
production. After that, step by step the country reached 17000 until
50000 Change preposition
to
litres
without any drop.Submitted by wishmeluck on
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