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The table below show daily oil production in four countries from 2000 to 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below show daily oil production in four countries from 2000 to 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table above depicts
oil
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 production per day in four different African countries between the years 2000 and 2004.
Overall
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, it can be seen that Nigeria had a
fluctuation
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 trend
while
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 Chad from the years 2000 until 2002 did not produce
oil
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 at all and
then
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 started
produce
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producing
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 in 2003.
Besides
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 that, Congo
have been
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has
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 experienced a
continuously increased
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 and Somalia
was
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 gradually decreased. First of all, Nigeria produces as many as 205.000
litres
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 of
oil
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, but
then
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 the
number
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 constantly sunk to 190.000 in 2000.
However
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, the
number
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was
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surprisingly rose again in 2003 with
the
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 total
number
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210.000
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of 210.000
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. On the other side, Chad did not
manufacturing
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manufacture
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oil
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 in
years
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the years
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 2000, 2001, and 2002. Suddenly, the country
produces
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produced
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 about 8000
litres
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 of
oil
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 and sharply climbed to 50000
litres
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, which was a really huge
number
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.
Initially
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, Congo started with a great
number
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between
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of
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 other countries, which was 275.000.
Nonetheless
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, the
oil
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 production became smaller, respectively 234.000, 222.000, 215.000, and 203.000.
Besides
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, there is Somalia
that
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which
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 started with just around 5000
oil
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 production. After that, step by step the country reached 17000
until
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to
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 50000
litres
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 without any drop.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "besides".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, litres, number with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Production levels
  • Trends
  • Increase/decrease
  • Fluctuation
  • Stable
  • Peak production
  • Output
  • Significant changes
  • Yearly comparison
  • Global production
  • Correlations
  • Patterns
  • Volume of production
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