Many countries have the same shops and products. Some consider it a positive development, whereas others consider it negative. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

While

it is widely observed that many countries have the same shops and

products

and often

considered

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it as a remark for

business

growth, others argue that

this

rather

bring

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about the

monolpoly

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monopoly

of big

coperates

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corporates

cooperates

overtaking small

businesses

. Both

point

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of

views

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and reasons why I

believed

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this

could adversely lead to negative developments in terms of the survival of small

businesses

will be elaborated on in

this

essay.

To begin

with, it seems sensible for some to believe that the expansion of their

products

and branches across the globe marks

as

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the success of their company.

This

is possibly because the presence of

products

and

business

chains worldwide can

implied

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be implied

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that there

were

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high

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demand

of

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for

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their goods and services. In

this

sense, there is no wonder why several people view

this

positively as it can attract revenues for

this

business

. Take

starbucks

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,

for example

; it is unarguable that you can

found

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them everywhere.

However

, many opponents of

this

idea might

opposed

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oppose

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that

this

might be seen as big

cooperate

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cooperation

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gradually becoming a monopoly of the industry. It is understandable that when these

business

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businesses

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venture globally

it

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they

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possess stronger brand quality,

identity

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and identity

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and

as well as

holding more customer loyalty than local

business

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businesses

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due to

its

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their

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potential

of producing

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massive goods with certain

standard

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standards

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. When it

come

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to local

businesses

, attention from the customers is vital for them and often

distract

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by these

branch

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branches

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of

well-known

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the well-known

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company

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companies

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instead

. From my point of view, I strongly agree with

potential

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detrimental

affect

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of

this

controversy seeing that

this big

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this big business

these big businesses

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businesses

pose a lethal threat

for

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to

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small companies.

Therefore

, there is

an

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apply

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evident show

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that when the growth of

this

business

branches and

products

expanded worldwide the local

business

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businesses

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were slowly vanished

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slowly vanished

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from the intensive

economics

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battles. In summary,

although

it is undeniable that one

products

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product

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can be seen worldwide can be viewed as a positive outcome in terms of

business-wise

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business

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, I am of the opinion that

this

can harmly affect the survival of local

business

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businesses

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as the aforementioned

coperate

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corporation

slowly

become

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becomes

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the

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a

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monopoly.