The chart below shows the changes in the percentage of households with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001.

The chart below shows the changes in the percentage of households with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001.
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bar chart represents
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information about the percentage changes
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one
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European country's
households
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, particularly
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car ownership between 1971 and 2001.
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, it can be clearly observed that the figures of the
households
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of cars underwent a downward trend,
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that of those owing automobiles either
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or more were fluctuated.
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, it is interesting to note that
at the end
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of the time frame
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ownership of
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car
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noticeable among all other groups. A closer look at the chart shows that in 1971 at just under 50% was the highest
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of
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households
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without cars before gradually fell to just above 40% in 1981 and
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to 30% in 1991 onwards.
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, that of those with
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households
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experienced the same trend by starting off at roughly 35% in 1971, slightly declined in the next ten years and plummeted to just under 20% in 1991 before
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its peak in 2001.
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,
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households
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with two cars were up and down from about 20% to 30% alternatively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words one, households with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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