The table shows the proportions of pupils attending foue secondary school types between 2000 and 2009
The given table illustrates the rate of students joining four secondary school types namely
Specialist
Schools
, Grammar Schools
, Voluntary-controlled Schools
, and Community Schools
from 2000 to 2009.
Overall
, pupils paid the greatest attention to voluntary-controlled schools
while
specialist
schools
reveal
the lowest figure over the Wrong verb form
revealed
give
period.
A closer look at the table clearly shows that in 200, students Change the verb form
given
choosen
the highest percentage Correct your spelling
chose
on
voluntary-controlled Change preposition
of
schools
, at 52%, but then
decreased significantly to 20% in 2009. The proportion of people attending grammar schools
declined mildly by 5% between 2000 and 2005, then
continued its downward trend to 12% in 2009.
In 2000, specialist
schools
and community school
had the same rate of pupils going to study, Fix the agreement mistake
schools
was
12%. But later, Correct pronoun usage
which was
specialist
schools
witnessed a slight decrease of 2% in the percentage of students joining in the survey period while
the figure for community schools
Correct your spelling
increased
incresed
rapidly from 12% to 58% over a period of 9 yearsCorrect your spelling
increased
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