The pie charts present the spending habits of people in UK in 1971 and 2001. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

The given pie charts

illustrates

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the proportion of expenditure habits of individuals in the UK from 1971 to 2001. The data is calibrated in percentage. I will elaborate

the

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features with relevant comparisons

further

.

Overall

it can be observed that

,

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these changes

displays

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a dramatic change in food consumption,

while

car usage

increase

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significantly.

Therefore

, spending on books saw a notable decline by the end of the

period

.

To begin

with, analysis shows a significant change in food expenditure over the given

period

. In 1971, food consumption accounted for 44% of average expenses, which is nearly half of the total.

However

,

this

segment

decline

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gradually by the end of the

period

, with less than a fifth of the total output.

In addition

, car usage among UK citizens began at over a fifth and doubled by 2001.

Further

analysing the paragraph, eating out in restaurants

also

experienced growth, starting at 7% and

double

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by the end of the

period

. Other expenses

such

as petrol and furniture comprised

at

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apply

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10% and 9%, respectively, but decreased by 1-2%, collectively by the time.

Whereas

, books and computer

shows

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opposite

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behaviour, where books decreased from 6% to 1%,

while

computer spending

increase

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by ten in one over the given

period

.