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The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates which components
GDP
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 in the UK consists of, in per cents, between 1992 and 2000.
Overall
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, the percentage of
GDP
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 from the IT
industry
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 and the service
industry
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 had gone up throughout the
period
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.
It is clear that
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GDP
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 in the IT area was significantly higher compared to its proportion from the service area. Focusing first on IT, in 1992, the level of
GDP
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 in
this
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industry
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 was at the level of just above 6%, with its following increase
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 2% by 1996. After that,
this
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 figure increased sharply, reaching almost 15% by the end of the
period
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. As for the gross domestic product from the service
industry
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, it was considerably lower throughout the
period
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. In 1992, only 4% came from services into
GDP
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.
However
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, by 1996, we can see a slight increase of nearly 2%. By the end of the
period
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,
this
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 indicator rose to 8%,
although
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 it was almost twice as low as the
GDP
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 of the IT
industry
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words gdp, industry, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • components
  • GDP
  • consumption
  • investment
  • government spending
  • net exports
  • display
  • categories
  • largest
  • increase
  • stable
  • range
  • decline
  • fluctuate
  • gradual
  • positive values
  • negative values
  • overall
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