The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar can

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in producing white

sugar

from

sugar

cane.

Sugar

canes are harvested after ripening which

it

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takes one year to eighteen months. There are two methods of harvesting:

first

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,

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traditional

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one that farmers cut

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by

hands

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. And

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second,

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is using agricultural equipment

such

as

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the combine

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.

Then

while

using special machinery to

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the plant, the

juice

of

sugar

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the sugar

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crane

gathered

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in a container by squeezing the inputs. In the next stage, a filter made with limestone is applied to purify the

juice

.

Syrup

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is the output of the next level. In an evaporator, cleaned

juice

is boiled until the

juice

becomes more concentrated by losing its water and turning to the syrup. Before the final step, a centrifuge, spinning significantly, segregates

sugar

crystals from the syrup.

Finally

,

sugar

crystals are dried and cooled and are ready for

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consumption.

Overall

, the process of producing

sugar

consists of seven steps, and a remarkable

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effort

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is required to bear the delicious good.