You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the total number of Olympic medals won by twelve different countries. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The figure illustrates the
number
of various Use synonyms
medals
Use synonyms
such
as Linking Words
gold
, silver and bronze Use synonyms
achieveing
by each country Correct your spelling
achieving
achieved
on
the Change preposition
as
olympic
champion.
Change the capitalization
Olympic
Over all
, it is evident that Correct your spelling
Overall
while
The USA achieves the most significant Linking Words
number
of various Use synonyms
medals
, Use synonyms
Japan
has the lowest position in the figure, Use synonyms
achieveing
the lowest Correct your spelling
achieving
Use synonyms
medals
Correct quantifier usage
number of medals
on
Change preposition
in
this
champion.
Linking Words
To begin
with, Linking Words
althogh
the Correct your spelling
although
most
Correct word choice
highest
number
of Use synonyms
gold
Use synonyms
medals
is related to Use synonyms
USA
Correct article usage
the USA
by
around 1000 Change preposition
with
medals
, the lowest Use synonyms
one's
is achieved by Change noun form
one
Japan
Use synonyms
by
approximately 100 Change preposition
with
medals
. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the most numerous silver and bronze Linking Words
medals
are belonged to The USA. It is noticeable that Use synonyms
Correct article usage
the Sovient
Sovient
Correct your spelling
Soviet
union
with Capitalize word
Union
near
500 Change the word
nearly
gold
Use synonyms
medals
stays Use synonyms
at
the second position. The Change preposition
in
Uk
and France are in the next positions respectively.
Correct your spelling
UK
Moreover
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
gold
Use synonyms
medals
related to China, East Germany and Hungary are the same. Use synonyms
However
,Linking Words
Japan
Use synonyms
achieves
more bronze Wrong verb form
achieved
medals
Use synonyms
compered
to China,regarding Correct your spelling
compared
to
Remove the preposition
apply
gold
Use synonyms
medals
, China has Use synonyms
the
higher position than Correct article usage
a
Japan
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, medals, gold, japan with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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