You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the total number of Olympic medals won by twelve different countries. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart below shows the total number of Olympic medals won by twelve different countries.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The figure illustrates the
number
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of various
medals
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such
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as
gold
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, silver and bronze
achieveing
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achieving
achieved
by each country
on
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as
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the
olympic
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Olympic
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champion.
Over all
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Overall
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, it is evident that
while
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The USA achieves the most significant
number
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of various
medals
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,
Japan
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has the lowest position in the figure,
achieveing
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achieving
the lowest
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medals
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number of medals
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on
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in
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this
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champion.
To begin
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with,
althogh
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although
the
most
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highest
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number
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of
gold
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medals
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is related to
USA
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the USA
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by
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with
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around 1000
medals
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, the lowest
one's
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one
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is achieved by
Japan
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by
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with
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approximately 100
medals
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.
Additionally
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, the most numerous silver and bronze
medals
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are belonged to The USA. It is noticeable that
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the Sovient
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Sovient
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Soviet
union
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Union
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with
near
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nearly
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500
gold
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medals
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stays
at
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in
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the second position. The
Uk
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UK
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and France are in the next positions respectively.
Moreover
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, the
number
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of
gold
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medals
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related to China, East Germany and Hungary are the same.
However
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,
Japan
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achieves
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achieved
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more bronze
medals
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compered
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compared
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to China,regarding
to
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apply
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gold
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medals
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, China has
the
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a
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higher position than
Japan
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, medals, gold, japan with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • medal tally
  • Olympic dominance
  • total medal count
  • podium positions
  • historical performance
  • athletic prowess
  • international competition
  • comparative analysis
  • global sporting event
  • country rankings
  • medal distribution
  • sporting achievements
  • performance trends
  • historical dominance
  • unexpected performance
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