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The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart reveals information about imported
tea
 and
coffee
 from four various countries. The units are measured in
tonnes
Overall
,
tea
 has the baggiest rate in the UK.
While
,
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Germany
 has the largest
coffee
 importation. Meanwhile, the rate is identical in both categories between
Canada
 and the US. Both
,
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tea
 and
coffee
 have the same fluctuations between four different countries. As can be seen from the bar graph, the UK has decreased
occurred
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in
coffee
 compared to
Canada
,
Germany
 and the United States
for
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 30000
tonnes
.
Whereas
,
Germany
 witnessed jumped in
coffee
 numbers for 50000
tonnes
.
In addition
, the United States and
Canada
 have equally imported
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nearly 40000
tonnes
. It is possible to see from the bar chart that, the UK in imported
tea
 dominated dramatically the other countries for 80000
tonnes
.
In contrast
,
Germany
 holds the second position in decreasing
tea
 imports, with a reduction of 40000 tons. The United States and
Canada
 have a similar number at 20000 tons.
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