The graph below shows the average monthly change in the price of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided line graph illustrates the data about the percentage of average
price
Use synonyms
change
of Copper, Nickel, and Use synonyms
Zink
in Correct your spelling
Zinc
one
Correct determiner usage
a
year
period in 2014.
Correct your spelling
one-year
Overall
, the trend of Nickel Linking Words
price
Use synonyms
change
has decreased, Use synonyms
while
Copper Linking Words
price
fluctuated but Use synonyms
Linking Words
at
the Change preposition
in
end
it was settled Add a comma
end,
as
the same amount when Change preposition
at
years
started. Correct article usage
the years
In contrast
, the Linking Words
change
of Zink Use synonyms
price
inclined in small percentage Use synonyms
at the end
of Linking Words
year
.
When considering Nickle, the Add an article
the year
price
Use synonyms
change
Use synonyms
compare
to Change the form of the verb
compared
previous
month, drastically dropped from January to March Correct article usage
the previous
the
slight decline in Correct article usage
a
next
two months but it plummeted Correct article usage
the next
its
lowest at -Change preposition
to its
3
% in June. The trend for Correct your spelling
-3
next
six months Correct article usage
the next
was fluctuated
but it was Change to the active voice
fluctuated
has fluctuated
upward
trend and Add an article
an upward
the upward
end
at 1% in December.
Zink had inclined its Wrong verb form
ended
price
Use synonyms
diffrence
from January to February Correct your spelling
difference
then
Linking Words
gradual decline
til June and reached the mean Replace the word
gradually declined
percentages
of 1%. Fix the agreement mistake
percentage
Then
it Linking Words
had
up and down Verb problem
went
next
6 months, Correct article usage
the next
finally
Linking Words
reached
Wrong verb form
reaching
near
2% in December. Copper Change the word
nearly
price
had Use synonyms
relatively
small drop Correct article usage
a relatively
Correct your spelling
from
fro
January to June Correct your spelling
from
then
gradually increased Linking Words
its
Correct pronoun usage
apply
price
and settled around the same value, at around 2%Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words price, change with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
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