The map below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map above depicts the current condition of Islip town centre and its future development.

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, it can be seen that on the first map, there is a dead end, but the planned development shows the

road

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become dual in the future. Not only that

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apply

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but

also

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there are some new facilities.

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with, school

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apply

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still remain

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its position. Meanwhile,

first

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the first

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housing

have

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slightly

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be slightly

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moved to another site because of the

road

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while

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the other one will be located inside of dual

carriageaway

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carriageway

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that, the size of

park

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the park

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will be smaller for the construction of the

road

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Furthermore

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, there will be no countryside as it

used

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is used

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for expanding the

road

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. Now,

main

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the main

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road

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flanking

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flanked

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with

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two shops.

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, on the plan map, the shop will reduced and

main

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the main

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road

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only can be used for pedestrians. The area for

shop

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the shop

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will be added new places,

such

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bus

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a bus

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station, shopping centre, car park, and two new housing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

162 words

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