The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.

summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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the bar chart depicts the
figures
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for family units in the United States yearly
income
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in the years 2007, 2011, and 2015. at first glance, the
number
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of American families with an annual
income
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of less than 25000$ rose significantly in the year 2011,
while
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the
figures
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for household annual
income
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over 100000 accounted for the largest
number
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of American citizens in the
last
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recorded year. In 2007, the
number
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of
households
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that earned more than 100000$ was just under 30
million
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,
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and doubled
figures
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of families had
income
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from 75000 to 99999. Over the following 4 years, the residences were less than 25000 and 25000- 49999 tended to increase significantly reaching approximately 29
million
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and 30
million
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, respectively, overtaking the
number
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of
households
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that have annual
income
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over 100000 with just under 27
million
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. Regarding the year 2015,
figures
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for
households
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under 50000 had a slight decrease,
while
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the
number
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of residences earned more than 100000 rose dramatically, becoming the most popular
income
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in the US.
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, family units with yearly
income
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from 50000 to 74999 remained stable,
whereas
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number
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of
households
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earned 75000 to 99999 had a negligible increase.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words figures, income, number, households, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household
  • income distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • significant growth
  • decline
  • comparative analysis
  • trends
  • disparity
  • shift
  • socio-economic factors
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