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The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
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The line chart illustrates information regarding through which medium how much quantity
goods
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of goods
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 were transported from one to another in the United Kingdom between 1974 and 2002.
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, it is crystal clear that water was the preferable option for transportation followed by roads which were at the highest.
To begin
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 with, pipelines were only able to carry 20 million
tones
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tonnes
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 of weight which was not much as compared to others,
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however
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 it improved a lot from its initial days. Talking about rail and water, they started
there
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their
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 journey from the same point but water could hold almost 60
ton
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tons
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 of quantity in 2002,
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 rail stayed at 40. Interestingly, roads were the best which carried almost 75 million
ton
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tons
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 even in 1974 and reached nearly 100 in the
last
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 year even after having some
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fluctuations
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transported goods
  • Quantities
  • Trends
  • Modes of transport
  • Rail
  • Road
  • Water
  • Pipeline
  • Fluctuations
  • Predominance
  • Economic influences
  • Societal changes
  • Technological advancements
  • Environmental impact
  • Growth
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Comparison
  • Period (e.g., decade, years)
  • Examination
  • Implications
  • Analysis
  • Conclusion
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