The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
The line chart illustrates information regarding through which medium how much quantity
goods
were transported from one to another in the United Kingdom between 1974 and 2002.
Change preposition
of goods
Overall
, it is crystal clear that water was the preferable option for transportation followed by roads which were at the highest.
Linking Words
To begin
with, pipelines were only able to carry 20 million Linking Words
tones
of weight which was not much as compared to others, Correct your spelling
tonnes
Linking Words
however
it improved a lot from its initial days. Talking about rail and water, they started Add a comma
however,
there
journey from the same point but water could hold almost 60 Correct your spelling
their
ton
of quantity in 2002, Fix the agreement mistake
tons
while
rail stayed at 40.
Interestingly, roads were the best which carried almost 75 million Linking Words
ton
even in 1974 and reached nearly 100 in the Fix the agreement mistake
tons
last
year even after having some Linking Words
flactuations
.Correct your spelling
fluctuations
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