The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given graph illustrates how many
people
have attended Use synonyms
to
various hobbies presented in a social centre in Melbourne Change preposition
apply
city
Capitalize word
City
in
Australia between 2000 Change preposition
apply
to
2020.
Correct word choice
and
Overall
, high attraction for film Linking Words
club
have always been at the top and had a Fix the agreement mistake
clubs
leveling
trend resembling Change the spelling
levelling
with
Martial arts Change preposition
apply
tendency
. Meanwhile, despite the Fix the agreement mistake
tendencies
amateur
dramatics which experienced an enormous decline in Use synonyms
number
of attendances, table tennis and musical Change the article
a number
the number
performance
faced Fix the agreement mistake
performances
increase
in Add an article
an increase
participations
Fix the agreement mistake
participation
at the end
of the period.
In 2000, Linking Words
Film
Correct article usage
the Film
club
, as the most popular activity among the others, had around 64 individuals participating in it which Capitalize word
Club
maintained
until 2020. Add a missing verb
was maintained
Additionally
, Martial Linking Words
art
with about 36 Fix the agreement mistake
arts
people
was the second place Use synonyms
at
the first year of the survey Change preposition
in
also
leveling at the same rate after some fluctuations. Linking Words
However
, musical performance, Linking Words
in
Linking Words
contrast
didn’t exist at Add the comma(s)
contrast,
first,
began Linking Words
at
2005, and had the lowest figure until it peaked after a moderate rise to under 20 Change preposition
in
people
attending.
Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
amateur
dramatics and table tennis Use synonyms
that
started at just more than 25 and more than half of it respectively in 2000. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Further
, after a resembling upward trend, Linking Words
interests
in Fix the agreement mistake
interest
amateur
dramatics fell enormously to become the lowest just under 10 Use synonyms
people
attending a year. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the figure for table tennisLinking Words
,
rocketed up to almost 60 in 2020 with a significant rise surpassing Remove the comma
apply
amateur
dramatic in 2010.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, amateur with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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