The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks like now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The given layout shows the modification of the central
library
before and after 20 years.
Overall
,The layout of the central
library
20 years ago had a table and chairs in the centre,
while
the northeast has a children's books section beside the computer games
room
, and next to the entrance, we have a reading
room
and enquiring desk.
According to
the new design in the north-west of the
library
, where children's fiction books are located, there is a comfortable sofa and a story-telling event.
while
in the northeast, they build a new lecture space in front of an improved information desk with self-service machines. The most significant change was the opening of a cafe near the entrance. Another big development was the relocation of the computer
room
to be in the southwest adjacent to the cafe.
To sum up
, Over the
last
20 years, the layout of the central
library
has changed significantly. The new design in the north-west, the addition of a cosy sofa and a storytelling event, the relocation of the computer
room
to the south-west, a new lecture space, and a cafe close to the entrance are just a few of the changes.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, room with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • undergo changes
  • reading room
  • central area
  • digital resources
  • physical books
  • collections
  • children's section
  • multimedia room
  • cater to
  • diverse needs
  • study rooms
  • private study spaces
  • reception area
  • modernized
  • shelving units
  • open spaces
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