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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks like now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks like now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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The given layout shows the modification of the central
library
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 before and after 20 years.
Overall
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,The layout of the central
library
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 20 years ago had a table and chairs in the centre,
while
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 the northeast has a children's books section beside the computer games
room
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, and next to the entrance, we have a reading
room
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 and enquiring desk.
According to
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 the new design in the north-west of the
library
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, where children's fiction books are located, there is a comfortable sofa and a story-telling event.
while
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 in the northeast, they build a new lecture space in front of an improved information desk with self-service machines. The most significant change was the opening of a cafe near the entrance. Another big development was the relocation of the computer
room
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 to be in the southwest adjacent to the cafe.
To sum up
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, Over the
last
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 20 years, the layout of the central
library
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 has changed significantly. The new design in the north-west, the addition of a cosy sofa and a storytelling event, the relocation of the computer
room
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 to the south-west, a new lecture space, and a cafe close to the entrance are just a few of the changes.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, room with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • undergo changes
  • reading room
  • central area
  • digital resources
  • physical books
  • collections
  • children's section
  • multimedia room
  • cater to
  • diverse needs
  • study rooms
  • private study spaces
  • reception area
  • modernized
  • shelving units
  • open spaces
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