The diagram below shows the life cycle of a frog.

#life #cycle #frog

The diagram below illustrates the range of

adult

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the adult

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frog – young

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frog–young

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frog

process.

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, the diagram

consist

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of 8

stage

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stages

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. İn addition the process

start

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starts

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with

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the Frogs

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Frogs

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Frogs'

Frog's

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Mating

stage

and

end

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up with

Adult

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the Adult

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Frog

stage

Also

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the

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these periods obivie to

tadpole

and land.

Firstly

Frogs

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the Frogs

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Mating

stage

is begin’s part of

cycle

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the cycle

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moreover

, it

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happens on the land. After that,

Females

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frogs put their eggs

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apply

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under water, it is

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follows

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tadpole

phase but before the

Tadpole

, eggs wait 7-10 days in the water.

Next,

the

Tadpole

phase

seperates

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separates

3 more steps.

First

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section takes 6 weeks after that, the other section takes 9 weeks,

finally

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and finally

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last

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the last

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stage

takes 12 weeks. After that , the frogs’ eggs can live on the

lands

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land

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(

this

Froglet

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the Froglet

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phase) so they start

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apply

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plumonary

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pulmonary

breathing.

Next,

they are

beeing

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being

seeing

young

frog

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frogs

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, after the froglet step. İn the end, they are

beeing

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being

adult

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adults

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in the

last

stage

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words frog, stage, tadpole with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
29Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

157 words

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Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Complete response

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The diagram below shows the life cycle of a frog.

ou have a problem with a recently hired employee in your workplace. Write a letter to the HR manager. In your letter: Describe the problem the new employee has caused Explain how other employees about the new employee’s conduct Say how you expect the HR manager to address the situation.

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