WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.
The given graph illustrates the percentage of unemployment rate in the US and Japan from
March
1993 to March
1999.
Overall
, it is clearly seen that the unemployment rate in the US experienced a downward trend, while
the unemployment rate experienced an upward trend in Japan.
In detail, the percentage of work force in the US started at 7.0%,
and decreased steeply to 5.5% in Remove the comma
apply
March
1995.The figure dropped slightly to 5.3% in March
1997, and fall
gradually to 4.0% in the final year.
Wrong verb form
fell
Turing
to the figure for Japan started at 2.4%, and increased considerably to 3.5% over the next three years. Correct your spelling
Turning
Then
the proportion maintained
between Verb problem
remained
March
1996 and March
1998.After that, the figure climbed rapidly to 4.7% in March
1999.Submitted by yskim3064 on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words march with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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