The chart below shows the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates why people prefer to commute to work either by bicycle or by car.
It is clear that
the most popular reasons for people to prefer drivingLinking Words
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are health/fitness and less pollution, Remove the comma
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whereas
the lowest percentage prefer it because of its speed and cost. Linking Words
Overall
, driving is popular among citizens mostly because it is comfortable, Linking Words
while
the least proportion of car lovers think that these vehicles are safer compared to bikes.
Focusing first on riding bikes, 30% of the population pick it because of ecological reasons, Linking Words
as well as
an alternative to fitness. Linking Words
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15% love riding as they do not have any parking issues during the use of them, Correct quantifier usage
Another
whereas
for those who prefer to ride a bike in order to get to work because of its price and high speed, is nearly 12%.
As for driving, 40% and 20% of people use their cars because of the comfort of Linking Words
this
mode of transport and the significant distance to work. Approximately 15% travel by car as they need to take some stuff with them or because they can be delivered from point A to B faster than by bicycle, Linking Words
while
only 10% say that it is safer.Linking Words
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