The Charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The Charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
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The pie charts provide information on the average
consumption
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rates of the three unhealthy nutrients consumed during a typical meal in the USA. These compare the percentage
consumption
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, of sodium, saturated fats, and added sugars.
Overall
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, The highest rate of
consumption
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of unhealthy nutrients is noticeable during
dinner
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, with the exception of added sugar, which has been greatly consumed during snacks. To illustrate, the ratio of sodium consumed during
dinner
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time is remarkable, with almost half, at 43%, followed by
lunch
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with less than a third at 29%,
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;
lunch
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and
dinner
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have the same rate of 14% each. of use of saturated fat, on
dinner
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has more than a third (37%), and breakfast with more than a fifth (16%)
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both
lunch
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and snack are around a quarter.
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, the percentage of Sodium nutrients almost half (43%) is consumed at
dinner
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time. In the same way, with the saturated fat, it is noticeable that having the same pattern as
dinner
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with the highest number of 37%,
however
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,
lunch
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and snacks both with moderate usage of 26% and 21% respectively. As with, breakfast with more than a fifth (16%). In
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with the two, added sugar differs, having snacks with the highest percentage of
consumption
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at 42%, and
dinner
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with less than a quarter at 23%.
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, the rate of breakfast and
lunch
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is slightly lower than 20%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, dinner, lunch with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Nutrients
  • Unhealthy
  • Daily intake
  • Percentage
  • Carbohydrates
  • Fats
  • Proteins
  • Meals
  • Balanced diet
  • Consumption
  • Excess
  • Health implications
  • Obesity
  • Diabetes
  • Heart disease
  • Convenience foods
  • Fast foods
  • Socioeconomic factors
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Healthy eating habits
  • Dietary recommendations
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