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Some people say that the current level of air travel is acceptable where as other people believe air travel should be reduced and the government should play a role in this. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

#people #level #air #travel #government #role
Traviling
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Travelling
 is a cornerstone of human life, but recent
advancement
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advancements
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 in technology has
transormed
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transformed
 the way we travel. Over
years
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the years
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,
air planes
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airplanes
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 have become increasingly popular than
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the tradional
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tradional
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traditional
way
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ways
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. In my. opinion, the current
level
 of
air
traviling
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travelling
 is acceptable
due to
 the
safety
 and the
economy
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economic
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 growth. To
begun
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 with, the latest
level
 of
air
 travel is acceptable because of the
safety
 of people who are on the
air planes
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aeroplanes
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.
Firstly
,
air
traveling
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travel
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 is the
most savest
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safest
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transportaion
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transportation
 way people have
been
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tried, there are
no
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not
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 many risks
on
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in
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 the sky
camparing
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compared
 with the
earth
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Earth
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.
Furthermore
, Recent research by the
university
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 of Prince Sultan has shown that 99.9%
from
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of
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the
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apply
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flights
on
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in
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 the sky
without
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are without
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 any
damages
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damage
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. In brief,
traviling
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travelling
on
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by
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air
 is better for individuals for
rate
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the rate
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 of
safety
 and fewer bad
efffects
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effects
.
In addition
, a
hight
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high
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percent
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percentage
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 of
economy
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the economy
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 depends on
air
, which
mean
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means
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 we can not reduce the
currnet
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current
level
 of
air
 travel.
For example
, many goods
onboard
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board
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of
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apply
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the
air planes
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aeroplanes
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,
reducing
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and reducing
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 them will
make
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cause
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economy
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economic
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issue
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issues
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.
Moreover
, we are in
speed
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a speed
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 era,
reducing
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and reducing
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 the range of
air
traviling
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travel
 will
make leeds
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lead
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 us to go back. In short,
air
taving
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having
saving
 is
crucail
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crucial
 for the
accelaration
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acceleration
 of
economy
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the economy
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. In conclusion, I believe that our rate
in
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 sky
traviling
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travelling
 is good, as the
risless
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rich
 and
wealth nation
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wealthy national
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improvments
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improvements
improvement
,
safety
 and
economy
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the economy
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 are the two
mean
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main
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 reasons to keep the current
level
, and
also
 I suggest that to stay
in
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at
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 the same
level
, even we increase it if it needs.
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coherence cohesion
Work on clearer structuring of paragraphs with topic sentences, supporting examples, and explanations. Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single main idea that's well-organized.
task achievement
Include more detailed examples and explanations to support your arguments. This can help to strengthen your response and make your essay more persuasive.
task achievement
Improve the completeness of your response by thoroughly exploring both sides of the argument in detail. Offer an equal amount of discussion for each perspective before presenting your opinion.
coherence cohesion
Your essay has a clear introduction and conclusion, which effectively frame your discussion.
task achievement
You successfully identified two main reasons (safety and economic growth) for maintaining current levels of air travel.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • aviation industry
  • global economy
  • carbon footprint
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • technological advancements
  • sustainable alternatives
  • noise pollution
  • high-speed rail networks
  • incentivize
  • green aviation technologies
  • fuel efficiency
  • cultural exchanges
  • personal and professional relationships
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