The diagram below shows the water cycle in both forested and urban areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the water cycle in both forested and urban areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram gives information about the cycle that
water
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follows in
areas
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full of trees
as well as
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in city
areas
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.
Overall
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, the stages are nearly the same in both
areas
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.
The first step is
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the fall down of
water
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during rainfalls and the
last
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is the return of
water
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to air by transpiration and evaporation. Between these steps, part of the
water
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enters
in
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the ground by infiltration,
while
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another part flows on the ground. In both
areas
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, the ground is divided into a permeable topsoil and a less permeable subsoil made
by
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rocks. Urban
areas
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are characterised by reduced infiltrations and so a decreased baseflow.
Furthermore
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, the reduced infiltrations are converted into a higher polluted runoff.
This
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leads to an increased erosion of the rock subsoil
that is
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absent in the forested
areas
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.
In addition
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, the absence of trees in urban
areas
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means that cities see a reduced amount of
water
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that returns to air by transpiration and evaporation.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, areas with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Precipitation
  • Absorption
  • Groundwater recharge
  • Evapotranspiration
  • Surface runoff
  • Impervious surfaces
  • Concrete
  • Asphalt
  • Stormwater systems
  • Vegetation
  • Water vapor
  • Local climate conditions
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