ask 1: The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

ask 1: The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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what did
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families
spend their weekly
income
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in 1963 and in 2018.
Overall
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,
according to
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the given data, in 1968
families
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were spending their weekly
income
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mostly on
food
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, housing, and
leisure
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and in 1988, they were using their average weekly spending on
food
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, clothing and accommodation.
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, by analyzing 1968 statistics, we can see that
families
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in one country were spending their weekly
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20% mostly on
leisure
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and housing,
as well as
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they were spending over 15% of their money on
food
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.
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, in 1968
families
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were spending the lowest amount of money on fuel and power with over 5% of total
income
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.
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, in 1988,
families
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were spending their weekly
fund
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mostly on
food
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and housing. Particularly spending on
food
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dramatically increased to 35%.
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, housing
cost
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is
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significantly decreased to 10% and
leisure
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marginally declined to below 10% as well. Taking everything into consideration, in 2018 compared to 1968,
families
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' weekly spending on
food
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and clothing
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increased,
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leisure
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and housing spending
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decreased.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words income, families, food, leisure with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • compare
  • spending patterns
  • allocated
  • weekly income
  • significant changes
  • essential items
  • food
  • housing
  • clothing
  • leisure
  • communication
  • increase
  • decrease
  • twofold rise
  • substantial increase
  • quadrupling
  • declined
  • food and drink
  • slight increase
  • prioritizing
  • necessities
  • transitioned
  • portio
  • non-essential items
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