The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate changes in the main pathways to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.
Overall
, what stands out from both maps is that parking spaces, bus stations and roads around the hospital were developed and modernized between these two years.
In detail, multiple bus stops on both sides of the hospital avenue in 2007 had been converted to
a big bus station on the west side of the main hospital pathway by 2010. Another noticeable development is that the car park for the public and staff on the east side of the hospital drive in 2007 was changed to a staff-only parking lot .Change preposition
into
Moreover
, a new spacious parking space was added on the east side of the hospital for public use in 2010.
Regarding traffic management, there were no roundabouts in 2007. however
, in 2010 two roundabouts were added at the north and the south part of the hospital lane where it crossed the hospital ring road and city boulvard
respectively.Correct your spelling
boulevard
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