The diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly.

The diagram gives information about the phases that a Monarch butterfly follows during its life.

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, the life cycle is made of four bigger stages,

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each

stage

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is divided into other phases. The first

stage

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is the egg

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and the

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is the adult one. Between them, there are the larval and the pupal stages.

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eggs are laid down on milkweed and after 14 days they hatch and caterpillars come out.

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, between the larval and the pupal stages, the larva attaches to a branch and after a

10 days

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10-day

period turns into a chrysalis. The pupal

stage

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starts with the emergence of the adult from the chrysalis and continues with the migration to the south of the newborn butterfly . After a 6 months period, the butterfly faces a migration to the north that ends with the mating phase and the subsequent laying of eggs.

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the cycle starts again.

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The diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly.

A colleague gave you a book which you used for your presentation. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter, you should say: what the presentation was about, why the presentation was important how the book helped you.

some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and wrong so that they can behave well others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects disduss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that the only way to relax is rest or sleep, while others say people need to do exercise or sport to relax. Discuss both view points and give your own opinion.

Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times. What are the advantages for a company of having a uniform? Is there any benefit of having a uniform for a staff?

Organized tours to remote communities and other countries are increasing popular. Is it a negative or positive development for the local people and environment ?