OUR ASSIGNMENT👇: You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: 1) Explain when and how long you will be in town. 2) Ask whether you can stay at their home. 3)Offer to pay for yourself.

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Dear

aman

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, I hope

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letter finds you healthy. I am writing

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letter in order to

elobrate

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elaborate

about my small trip idea in your city. I am

planing

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to come next month on 3rd December as my boss gave me a leave for 2 weeks after asking multiple times. As you know, I am

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introvert

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personality which made me stuck with only one close friend

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you. I want to spend my all vacation with you at your place if possible.

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, I never lived alone before.

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month,

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got a job offer from overseas which

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utlimately

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denied as I

cant

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survive alone

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a new place. The fear of living alone is still in my mind , it

sometime

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bring

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obsctacles

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in my life

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lost

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big

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opportunities .

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this

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dont

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even have closer ones in your city. These days, inflation is a

debetable

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topic. It

create

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problem

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for

middle

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class and lower middle class as their income level is lower than money

expeses

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expenses

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seeking for job from time

time

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. I want to be a burden on you and your family. I am

wiiling

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to pay my living

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staying

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period. I will be waiting for your response. Your lovingly, Raman

bajwaraman415Sun Nov 24 2024

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Coherence & Cohesion

Consider organizing your letter into clearer paragraphs to improve readability

Task Achievement

Ensure clarity in your sentence structure to avoid misunderstandings.

Task Achievement

Your letter has a warm and friendly tone, perfect for addressing a relative.

Coherence & Cohesion

You included a greeting and a closing, which make the letter feel complete.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter maintains focus on your visit, offering reasons for staying, which ties the content together well.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

220 words

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*OUR ASSIGNMENT*👇: You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: 1) Explain when and how long you will be in town. 2) Ask whether you can stay at their home. 3)Offer to pay for yourself.

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Nowadays, people of all ages from certain parts of the world spend most time at home rather than going outdoors. Discuss the reasons, is this negative or positive development?

OUR ASSIGNMENT👇: You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: 1) Explain when and how long you will be in town. 2) Ask whether you can stay at their home. 3)Offer to pay for yourself.