Write a letter to a manager whose company is constructing their new office next to your apartment. • Introduce yourself • Describe problems you are facing because of this • Suggest solutions
Dear,
Sir/ madam
I appreciate you taking the time to review
this
message . First and Linking Words
the most
, Congratulations Correct your spelling
foremost
for
your new beginning . I Change preposition
on
here by
, Drashti Correct your spelling
hereby
chotaliya
wanted to discuss something crucial .
I wanted to quickly touch base regarding a concern faced Change the capitalization
Chotaliya
due to
your new office construction held near our apartment. Linking Words
However
, I understand your planning towards great sustainability and ecological development Linking Words
are
very great. But, Correct subject-verb agreement
is
i
have Change the capitalization
I
concern
regarding uneven scaffolding done on the other side which faces towards the apartment . So, Fix the agreement mistake
concerns
i
would like to ask about maintaining proper distance or Change the capitalization
I
by
providing new nets on the scaffolding which can ultimately decrease direct dust particles in our premises.
Kindly , Change preposition
apply
i
would like to ask Change the capitalization
I
measures
taken for the improvements to be made by your side . Change preposition
for measures
Moreover
, Linking Words
anyother
alternative precaution suggestion would Correct your spelling
another
any other
also
be better for following up by ourselves as well. I would respect your Linking Words
respond
Replace the word
response
although
.
Thank and Regards
Drashti chotaliyaLinking Words
Submitted by drashtichotaliya12 on
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure your greeting and closing are more formal and consistent.
Task Achievement
Include more specific details to strengthen your argument and suggestions.
Task Achievement
You introduced yourself and clearly stated your problem.
Task Achievement
It's great that you acknowledged the company's efforts positively before stating your concern.
Task Achievement
Your suggestion to use nets is clear and practical.