Write a letter to a manager whose company is constructing their new office next to your apartment. • Introduce yourself • Describe problems you are facing because of this • Suggest solutions

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Dear, Sir/ madam I appreciate you taking the time to review

this

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message . First and

the most

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, Congratulations

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your new beginning . I

here by

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, Drashti

chotaliya

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Chotaliya

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wanted to discuss something crucial . I wanted to quickly touch base regarding a concern faced

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your new office construction held near our apartment.

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, I understand your planning towards great sustainability and ecological development

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very great. But,

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have

concern

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concerns

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regarding uneven scaffolding done on the other side which faces towards the apartment . So,

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would like to ask about maintaining proper distance or

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apply

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providing new nets on the scaffolding which can ultimately decrease direct dust particles in our premises. Kindly ,

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would like to ask

measures

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for measures

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taken for the improvements to be made by your side .

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anyother

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another

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alternative precaution suggestion would

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be better for following up by ourselves as well. I would respect your

respond

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although

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. Thank and Regards Drashti chotaliya

drashtichotaliya12Mon Nov 25 2024

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Coherence and Cohesion

Try using more structured paragraphs to enhance clarity and flow.

Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure your greeting and closing are more formal and consistent.

Task Achievement

Include more specific details to strengthen your argument and suggestions.

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You introduced yourself and clearly stated your problem.

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It's great that you acknowledged the company's efforts positively before stating your concern.

Task Achievement

Your suggestion to use nets is clear and practical.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

163 words

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Write a letter to a manager whose company is constructing their new office next to your apartment. • Introduce yourself • Describe problems you are facing because of this • Suggest solutions

Many parents choose to teach their children at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the benefits of homeschooling outweigh its drawbacks?

In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Today more and more tourist are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctica. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Most people are not interested in how their food has been produced. They only care about how much it costs. To what extent to you agree or disagree?