Write a letter to a manager whose company is constructing their new office next to your apartment. • Introduce yourself • Describe problems you are facing because of this • Suggest solutions

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Dear, Sir/ madam I appreciate you taking the time to review
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message . First and
the most
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, Congratulations
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your new beginning . I
here by
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, Drashti
chotaliya
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wanted to discuss something crucial . I wanted to quickly touch base regarding a concern faced
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your new office construction held near our apartment.
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, I understand your planning towards great sustainability and ecological development
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very great. But,
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have
concern
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regarding uneven scaffolding done on the other side which faces towards the apartment . So,
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would like to ask about maintaining proper distance or
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providing new nets on the scaffolding which can ultimately decrease direct dust particles in our premises. Kindly ,
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would like to ask
measures
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taken for the improvements to be made by your side .
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,
anyother
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another
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alternative precaution suggestion would
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be better for following up by ourselves as well. I would respect your
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although
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. Thank and Regards Drashti chotaliya
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Include more specific details to strengthen your argument and suggestions.
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You introduced yourself and clearly stated your problem.
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It's great that you acknowledged the company's efforts positively before stating your concern.
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Your suggestion to use nets is clear and practical.
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