The diagram below shows how soft cheese is made. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram provides a detailed overview of the
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production, highlighting the various stages involved.
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Overall
, the production of soft Linking Words
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As shown in the diagram, the combination of water and milk is the first stage of the Use synonyms
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transferred to another tank and cooled at 5 degrees Linking Words
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for 120 minutes. After cooling, the mix is fermented in a separate tank at 37 degrees Use synonyms
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for 6 hours. Prior to fermentation, salt is added to achieve the desired salinity for the Use synonyms
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Following fermentation, the excess water in the fermented substance is almost completely removed through evaporation in a 100-degree Use synonyms
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tank over 8 hours. Use synonyms
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, the mixture is passed through a filtration Linking Words
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to eliminate wastewater, resulting in a thicker consistency. To become marketable soft Use synonyms
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for 8 hours once again. Use synonyms
Additionally
, another filter is used to remove any remaining wastewater, ensuring the high quality of the soft Linking Words
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