The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.

The given bar chart compares the number of
tea
and
coffee
imported by four different nations, measured in
tonnes
. The UK stands out for its substantial
tea
imports
, contrasting with other countries where
coffee
imports
are generally higher. The United Kingdom stands out as the largest importer of
tea
, bringing in approximately 80,000
tonnes
, which is double the amount imported by Germany, the second-largest
tea
importer at around 40,000
tonnes
. In stark contrast, both Canada and the United States import relatively modest quantities of
tea
, with each country recording around 20,000
tonnes
.
On the other hand
,
coffee
imports
show a different trend, as Germany leads with approximately 50,000
tonnes
, followed closely by Canada and the United States, each importing around 40,000
tonnes
. Interestingly, the United Kingdom, which
imports
the most
tea
, has the lowest
coffee
imports
among the four countries, at roughly 30,000
tonnes
.
This
demonstrates that
while
tea
is heavily
favored
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favoured
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in the UK,
coffee
dominates the
import
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imported
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landscape in Germany, Canada, and the US, albeit with varying degrees of preference.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, coffee, tonnes, imports with synonyms.
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