Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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Nowadays it is a common trend to introduce
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multinational
brands
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in
third world
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countries.
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drawbacks of these initiatives with examples. Starting a multinational business in a state has several
advanatges
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advantages
. First of
all
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people
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can have easy access to international
brands
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of their own
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in their cities. In
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they do not need to spend a lot of money to go abroad and do
thier shoping
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their shopping
. For
examle
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example
, to buy Gucci bags and other branded
stuffs
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stuff
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,
some time
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sometimes
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people
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of Pakistan had to visit
Duabi
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Dubai
that
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required high costs. But nowadays we can buy these
products
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easily in Karachi without visiting any other country.
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,
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interantional
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international
companies
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bring huge
investments
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, when they start their business
oulets
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outlets
in economically weak countries. In
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foreign
investments
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strengthen
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such
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country’s
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a country’s
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economy.
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, India’s economy boosted exponentially with
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of several foreign
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, there are several negative impacts of these multinational
companies
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on local
products
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. The most noticeable disadvantage is
decrease
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a decrease
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in
sale
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the sale
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of local
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which destroys the local markets.
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, in
Pakistan
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Pakistan,
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the total sale of local shoe
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reached
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a minimum level
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international
brands
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like BATA which attract the public more.
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, compared to local
products
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these
brands
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are very costly and only rich persons can buy these
producs
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products
while
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majority
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of
public
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can not afford to buy these things. In
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most
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people
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develop
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of poverty which results in polarization in these societies. In conclusion,
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foreign
companies
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bring good quality
products
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and
investments
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to developing countries which boost their economy,
but
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these
companies
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also
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destroy
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local
business
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businesses
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and develop
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unrest among native
people
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Globalization
  • Multinational corporations (MNCs)
  • Foreign direct investment (FDI)
  • Developing economies
  • Infrastructure development
  • Capacity building
  • Cultural diversity
  • Sustainability
  • Corporate social responsibility (CSR)
  • Technological transfer
  • Economic disparity
  • Market saturation
  • Brain drain
  • Indigenous industries
  • Expatriate management
  • Trade imbalance
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