The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Generally speaking, it is evident that there were more movies produced than
ticket's
sold for those Change noun form
tickets
films
in both 1996 and 2006.
In 1996 there were produced about 26% of films
in
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were in
drama
category, Add an article
the drama
a drama
however
in Add a comma
however,
2006
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2006,
this
number jumped up to 35% this
follows for the rest of the movies such
as comedy's
and Change the noun form
comedies
comedy
fantasy's
with the only exception being romance Change the noun form
fantasies
fantasy
films
which stayed at 7% for both 1996 and 2006.
This
can be explained by the cinema ticket
sales, which show that general interest in romance films
decreased over the years and is at it's
downfall in 2006 by Replace the word
its
aproximatlly
3% compared to 5% in 1996. Correct your spelling
approximately
Generlly
speaking the graph for Correct your spelling
Generally
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the precentage
precentage
of cinema Correct your spelling
percentage
ticket
sales is very similar to the graph of
Change preposition
for
film's
released with the only difference in the twofold of Change noun form
films
procentage
in Correct your spelling
percentage
the
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apply
ticket
sales, also
the amount of comedy movie's
which shows the high interest Change noun form
movies
for
Change preposition
of
costumers
in comedy Correct your spelling
customers
films
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