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The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for 2025.

The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for 2025.
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The line graph illustrates the movement of individuals from
countryside
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the countryside
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 to city areas in
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country
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countries
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 A,
B
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, and
C
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 by 2000 and
forecastions
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forecasting
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 for future years. The figures are given in millions.
Overall
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, it can be seen that
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country
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countries
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 A,
B
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, and
C
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 had an increasing number of people who
moving
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moved
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 to urban
area
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areas
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. Looking at
frist
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first
 at the years in the part, people moving from
country
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 A
stated
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started
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 at under 20 and
then
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 increased noticeably to approximately 80 between 2000 and 2020. At the same time, there was a negligible slight in
country
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B
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 to under 20
befroe
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before
 soaring to around 80 by 2020.
In contrast
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, The figure for
country
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C
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 rose
gradully
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gradually
 to above 20 in 2020. Moving on to the year in the future, the figure for
country
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 A is predicted to grow markedly by 80 to above 80.
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 it is projected that there will be
rocket
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a rocket
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 in
country
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B
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 to above 20. In 2025, the movement of individuals in
country
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C
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 is forecast to remain stable at above 20.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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