The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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the diagrams illustrate the main differences in the same Library after twenty years, comparing

it is clear that

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the main characteristics that have changed are: more comfortable and clearer spaces,

improved

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and improved

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technology in its facilities.

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Nowadays

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, nowadays places are clearer than in the past, with modern spaces without excessive furniture,

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spaces designed to offer well-being to clients,

for

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the cafeteria room, sofas in different rooms or the computer room.

Overall

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, technology is currently more important and used than in previous years,

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customer service is more efficient and faster than the Central Library 20 years ago, including self-service machines for purchasing tickets or returning books.

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, the differences are very notable, mainly in comfort and customer service.