The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table gives information about the variation in the
percentage
of national consumer expenditure Use synonyms
of
different items in 5 countries in 2002.
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Overall
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while
food,drinks and tobacco were the most popular items among the three types, the opposite could be seen in leisure and education.Turkish spent the most money on food, drinks and tobacco Linking Words
while
clothing and footwear were most purchased by Italians.
Among five countries, food/drink/tobacco was the most spent by consumers. The Linking Words
percentage
of consumer expenditure in Turkey was the highest with 32.14%, followed by Ireland with 28.91%. Italy, Spain and Sweden spent under 20% of their budget with Sweden Use synonyms
had
the smallest Wrong verb form
having
percentage
at 15.77%
The consumption of clothing/footwear ranked 2nd in the report. The expenditure of the other countries in Use synonyms
this
category was below 7% except for Italy which spent 9% on clothing/footwear. Specifically, the Linking Words
percentage
of consumer spending on these items in Sweden was the lowest with only 5.40%.
The smallest portion was allocated to leisure and education. In Use synonyms
this
category, Turkish spent the most compared to the others with 4.35% Linking Words
while
the opposite was true for Spanish who only spent 1.98% Linking Words
for
these products.Change preposition
on
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