The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table gives information about the variation in the
percentage
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of national consumer expenditure
of
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on
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different items in 5 countries in 2002.
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food,drinks and tobacco were the most popular items among the three types, the opposite could be seen in leisure and education.Turkish spent the most money on food, drinks and tobacco
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clothing and footwear were most purchased by Italians. Among five countries, food/drink/tobacco was the most spent by consumers. The
percentage
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of consumer expenditure in Turkey was the highest with 32.14%, followed by Ireland with 28.91%. Italy, Spain and Sweden spent under 20% of their budget with Sweden
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the smallest
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at 15.77% The consumption of clothing/footwear ranked 2nd in the report. The expenditure of the other countries in
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category was below 7% except for Italy which spent 9% on clothing/footwear. Specifically, the
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of consumer spending on these items in Sweden was the lowest with only 5.40%. The smallest portion was allocated to leisure and education. In
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category, Turkish spent the most compared to the others with 4.35%
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the opposite was true for Spanish who only spent 1.98%
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these products.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "gives" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer spending
  • items
  • countries
  • food
  • drinks
  • tobacco
  • clothing
  • footwear
  • household goods
  • services
  • leisure
  • education
  • other products
  • comparison
  • highest
  • lowest
  • followed by
  • in all countries
  • various
  • summarise
  • main features
  • relevant
  • information
  • selecting
  • reporting
  • spending
  • table
  • goods
  • data
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