In some countries good school and medical facilities are available in city only. Some people think that teachers and good hospital, education should be provided in rural areas for few years. While some people think that every person is free to do work according to their choice. Discuss your ideas and opinion. Discuss both the sides.
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NOWADAYS, BETTER EDUCATION AND HEALTHCARE I BELIEVE THAT MANDATORY
SYSTEM
ARE ACCESSIBLE ONLY IN Fix the agreement mistake
SYSTEMS
CITIES
. SOME PEOPLE
CLAIM THAT NOT ONLY CITIES
,
BUT Remove the comma
apply
ALSO
RURAL AREAS
SHOULD HAVE ACCESS TO SCHOOLS AND MEDICAL SYSTEM, WHILE
OTHERS SAY THAT IT DEPENDS ON INDIVIDUAL'S
CHOICE ,AS THEY ARE INDEPENDENT. Correct article usage
THE INDIVIDUAL'S
THIS
ESSAY WILL DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS IN SUPPORT OF FORMER.
ON THE ONE HAND, PEOPLE
THINK THAT THEY HAVE CHOICE
Correct article usage
A CHOICE
INDEPENDENCE
, WHEREVER THEY CAN WORK, APART FROM THAT Change preposition
OF INDEPENDENCE
PEOPLE
'S CHOICE
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CHOICES
RELIED
ON THEIR LIFE CONDITIONSWrong verb form
RELY
,
AND SKILLS. PERSONAL FREEDOM CAN Remove the comma
apply
LED
TO THE SIGNIFICANT IMPROVEMENTS AND CAREER PROSPECTS, WORKING IN AN ENVIRONMENT WHEREChange the verb form
LEAD
BE LED
INDIVIUDALS
Correct your spelling
INDIVIDUALS
FEELING
HAPPY Wrong verb form
FEEL
IT
CAN BE RESULTED IN THE EFFECTIVE OUTCOMES. Correct pronoun usage
apply
FOR INSTANCE
, AFTER GRADUATING UNIVERSITY
DOCTORS ARE GIVEN CHANCES TO SELECT WHERE THEY WORK, EITHER IN Change preposition
FROM UNIVERSITY
CITIES
OR RURAL AREAS
, EVEN THOUGH
OVERSEAS.
Correct word choice
apply
ON THE OTHER HAND
, WHICH
I SIDE WITH THOSE WHO STRONGLY CLAIM THAT RURAL Correct pronoun usage
apply
AREAS
HAVE TO ACCESS HIGH-QUALITY EDUCATION AND MEDICAL SERVICES
. ENFORCING MANDATORY SERVICES
WOULD PREVENT MIGRATION
OF Correct article usage
THE MIGRATION
PEOPLE
IN RURAL AREAS
, AS WELL AS
URBANIZATION. WHAT I MEAN BY THAT, IN
ORDER TO Add a missing verb
IS IN
GETTING
BETTER EDUCATION STUDENTS MOVE FROM THEIR Change the verb
GET
HOMETOWN
TO Fix the agreement mistake
HOMETOWNS
CITIES
IT
Correct pronoun usage
WHICH
RESULTED
IN DENSELY-POPULATED CITY LIFE AND FEELING HOMESICKNESS. Wrong verb form
RESULTS
ADDITIONALLY
, MOVING FROM CITIES
TO RURAL LIFE IS THE WAY FOR GETTING
AWAY FROM Change preposition
TO GET
HUSTLE
AND BUSTLE OF Correct article usage
THE HUSTLE
CITIES
, ALSO
SOME PEOPLE
MIGHT BE UNAWARE OF LIFESTYLE
OF RURAL Correct article usage
THE LIFESTYLE
AREAS
, BY THIS
WAY THEY CAN BROADEN HORIZONS
AND Correct pronoun usage
THEIR HORIZONS
GETTING
Wrong verb form
GET
BETTER
LIFESTYLE. MANDATORY Correct article usage
A BETTER
SERVICES
CAN LED TO GROWTH IN THE NUMBER OF EDUCATED PEOPLE
AND PROFESSIONALS.
TO CONCLUDE
, BOTH SIDES MIGHT BE RIGHT TO CERTAIN
DEGREE, Correct article usage
A CERTAIN
HOWEVER
Add a comma
,
SERVICES
IN RURAL AREAS
CAN BE CONTRIBUTED
Wrong verb form
CONTRIBUTE
SIGNIFICANT
DEVELOPMENTS.Change preposition
TO SIGNIFICANT
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