Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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barriers are the most common issue of people who want to live overseas

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is because of social and practical difficulties. That's why most foreign countries require an individual to undergo a certain

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evaluation or training to remove themselves from isolation and discrimination. I completely agree with

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notion and will discuss it in

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essay. To start, people are aware that, in order to survive living overseas they need to be very conversant so they would not have to isolate themselves and gain a stable

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in their chosen destination.

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, one of the common ways is by taking

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test, which is common for migrants and international students in American and European countries.

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process has been used in visa screening of an individual, wherein the immigration officer would ask a series of questions to determine their level of communication, in that way, they will know if they have the capacity to start their new

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away from their home. Since

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they will have to interact with other people in their daily

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as classmates at school, colleagues in the workplace, going to the

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, dining in a restaurant and knowing their future neighbours.

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, in order to adapt

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abroad, an individual will need to look for a job, but having difficulty communicating with others is an issue. In fact, if the person is not confident attending the interview process they would end up not getting the job.

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, leading to unemployment and discrimination. Aside from that, if in case they are working in a company in an Arab country

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, and they see themselves growing with

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company, others may think of pursuing a promotion. Since

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there are other employees who are bilingual,

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where discrimination comes in, companies would prefer them because of their better

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qualification and the company would benefit more. Even if, that person does not have the experience but only the

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advantage. In conclusion, speaking a foreign

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is very important when living in another country as it will help the person to grow and have a stable

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overseas. Not adapting and keeping themselves isolated can cause stress which beats the purpose of trying to live a

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in a different country.

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Ensure that each main point is fully developed with clear and comprehensive ideas. Consider providing more detailed examples or explanations to support your arguments.

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The essay addresses the task response clearly by discussing the important role of language proficiency in mitigating social and practical issues.

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Well-structured essay with a clear introduction and conclusion, which effectively presents and summarizes the main points.

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The examples relating to immigration, job interviews, and workplace dynamics successfully demonstrate the practical and social challenges faced by non-native speakers.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

linguistic proficiency
cross-cultural communication
miscommunication
social integration
linguistic alienation
cultural dissonance
language acquisition
communication breakdown
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language courses
bilingualism
multilingualism
language barrier
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