Compared to the past, more people are now trying to learn a foreign languages to increase their chances of landing a better job in their native country or having better opportunities to work abroad. To what extent do you agree with this point of view? Give specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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There is no denying the fact that enhancing your qualifications will impact your career positively.
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task achievement
Expand on your main points with examples to strengthen your argument. For instance, mention a specific job market where foreign language skills have advantages or a personal story about language aiding career growth.
coherence cohesion
Ensure you have a clear thesis statement that outlines your argument. This will guide your essay and make it clear to the reader the position you are taking.
coherence cohesion
Provide a brief conclusion that summarizes your main points and restates your stance on the issue. This will give your essay a sense of closure.
coherence cohesion
The introduction successfully sets the context and presents the topic which engages the reader's interest.
task achievement
The essay acknowledges both sides of the argument, which shows a balanced view before stating a personal opinion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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