The table shows information about metro systems in six different cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows information about metro systems in six different cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table gives information about six different
cities
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metro
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systems.
Overall
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, these
cities
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have
metro
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systems that are really different from each other. Asian
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have by far the most annual journeys. Indeed, Beijing and Tokyo experience more than 3 billion journeys each year. Nearly double than New York which takes the third position with 1.65 billion annual journeys.
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, London has the most expensive single ticket, with $7.30,
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Beijing and Mexico City have the cheapest ones with less than 1 US dollar. New York counts the highest number of
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,
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the lowest can be found in London. These two
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respectively have 24 and 11
lines
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.
Due to
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its number of
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, New York
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has the highest total length of these
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systems, with 659 miles,
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the
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system in Paris is the shortest (127 miles), even if it has 16
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, which is more than those of Mexico City, Tokyo and London.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 86%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cities, metro, lines with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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