The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graphs depict the influence of electrical use in households and how many
hours
per week
that need
for housework in households in one nation from 1920 to 2019. Wrong verb form
needed
Overall
, all kinds of electronic devices in this
graph increased in all time
periods while
time
spent showed a descending trend from the initial period.
In 1920, the domestic that had a
refrigerators was approximately 3% compared to 30% for vacuum cleaners and 40% for washing machines. Correct article usage
apply
However
, in 1960 refrigerator users skyrocketed surpassing laundry machine
and floor Fix the agreement mistake
machines
cleaner
at 90%. Replace the word
cleaners
Although
washing appliances remained higher over 20 years, it dropped slightly in 1980 before rebounding marginally and reaching 72% for the final portion in 2019. On the other hand
, vacuum robots shared a similar number with laundry robots in 1960 and continued climbing over the last
year, showing 100% in 2000 and 2019.
In the second paragraph, the amount of time
spent cleaning the house dropped gradually by 15% every twenty years until 1960, from 50 hours
/week
to 35 hours
/week
to 20 hours
/week
. In 1980, the total time
declined insignificantly before steady and falling again in 2019 by 10 hours
/week
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